Badge ID: 84476

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User name: Ana Šimičić Nižetić

User name: Anna Rohde-Seyfried

User name: Ante Šimić

User name: antea

User name: dansefton@me.com

User comment: Possibly interesting but needs a stronger character arc and more events in the story.

User name: Denis Karam

User comment: Family bonds always challenging to paste form paper to screen but also very much doable if the characters "meet" expectation and the final message is del iered. Cool.

User name: Francesca Paola Ricci

User name: Gabor Krigler

User name: ivan@mediavision.hr

User name: Jasmina Božinovska Živalj

User name: Jovan Marjanović

User name: katarina.tomkova@midpoint-institute.eu

User name: marko.sustic

User name: mercedes.fernandez@torinofilmlab.it

User comment: The main character is well described, we have the feeling that we know her. Themes that can work well with twenty-something audience

User name: michael@screenwriterschool.com

User name: Nataša Buljan

User name: nina.markovac@pickbox.tv

User name: Robert.Franke@zdf-enterprises.de

User comment: Very Zeitgeist-y. However I fail to see a lot of redeeming Elements in the characters. There is a disbalance between the fucked up Situation of the main charcter and what goes well. I understand conceptually that this shall help to emphazise with the basal narrative Elements and the emotional Driver of the her but it feels mostly bleak. In times of covid, the Climate and economic crises i would strongly recommend to add more lighter notes to the Story telling because in particular Young adults go for more escapisitc themes.

User name: Sanja.Tucman@novatv.hr

User name: sarah

User name: Steve.Matthews@hbo.com

User comment: Great anarchic attitude; work on storylines.

User name: Stjepan Dianić

User name: Triin Tramberg

User name: Vesna Karuza