Badge ID: 83289

User name: admin

User name: Ana Šimičić Nižetić

User name: Anna Rohde-Seyfried

User comment: The plot of the show is mainly hidden in the character disposition - will need a "transformation" into action.

User name: Ante Šimić

User name: antea

User name: dansefton@me.com

User comment: Feels more like an indie movie than a series

User name: Denis Karam

User comment: Does distance always build the bridges? Some good detail but the scrip could benefit with further enhancements.

User name: Francesca Paola Ricci

User name: Gabor Krigler

User name: ivan@mediavision.hr

User name: Jasmina Božinovska Živalj

User name: Jovan Marjanović

User name: katarina.tomkova@midpoint-institute.eu

User name: marko.sustic

User name: mercedes.fernandez@torinofilmlab.it

User comment: This project has an original idea and it is well developed, you can understand and commit with the characters. It has a potential large audience, as it is a dramedy on family.

User name: michael@screenwriterschool.com

User name: Nataša Buljan

User name: nina.markovac@pickbox.tv

User name: Robert.Franke@zdf-enterprises.de

User comment: I like the premise - very clear set up. I would strongly reconsider the Format though. Eight Episodes for something which feels more like a movie or a mini series seems to much and will probalby cause to Story engine to run out of steam mid Season. I would recommend to cut out a lot of narrative fluff and just boldly produce a mini series of 3 to 4 episodes max … and don't make it returning.

User name: Sanja.Tucman@novatv.hr

User name: sarah

User name: Steve.Matthews@hbo.com

User comment: The problem here is that the sit-in-garden-and-bring-about-family-reconciliation really feels like a single story, it's a film idea, it doesn't sustain a series. The characters and themes are good but the core idea feels like an episode idea.

User name: Stjepan Dianić

User name: Triin Tramberg

User name: Vesna Karuza