User comment: Here again, some notes concerning style & tone would be crucial - the genre "feminist dystopia" is great, but doesn't offer any reference.
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User comment: The rules of the world need to be clearer. These are such hard things to make without IP that the pitch has to be brilliant. This isn't inspiring confidence.
User name: Denis Karam
User comment: Nice idea, great plot and good writing. Has most of the ingrediencies to make it big-ish and ww potential
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User comment: The arena has potential, the exposition is confusing, the characters' relations and motivations should be worked more
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User name: Nataša Buljan
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User name: Robert.Franke@zdf-enterprises.de
User comment: Solid scifi cost with a hint of dystopy. Clearly structured and well flushed out. Not much else to say that this is going to be hard to financed since the market is crowded with similarly themed Projects.
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User comment: Here again, some notes concerning style & tone would be crucial - the genre "feminist dystopia" is great, but doesn't offer any reference.
User name: Ante Šimić
User name: antea
User name: dansefton@me.com
User comment: The rules of the world need to be clearer. These are such hard things to make without IP that the pitch has to be brilliant. This isn't inspiring confidence.
User name: Denis Karam
User comment: Nice idea, great plot and good writing. Has most of the ingrediencies to make it big-ish and ww potential
User name: Francesca Paola Ricci
User name: Gabor Krigler
User name: ivan@mediavision.hr
User name: Jasmina Božinovska Živalj
User name: Jovan Marjanović
User name: katarina.tomkova@midpoint-institute.eu
User name: marko.sustic
User name: mercedes.fernandez@torinofilmlab.it
User comment: The arena has potential, the exposition is confusing, the characters' relations and motivations should be worked more
User name: michael@screenwriterschool.com
User name: Nataša Buljan
User name: nina.markovac@pickbox.tv
User name: Robert.Franke@zdf-enterprises.de
User comment: Solid scifi cost with a hint of dystopy. Clearly structured and well flushed out. Not much else to say that this is going to be hard to financed since the market is crowded with similarly themed Projects.
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